Nice, dark, and tense...
Fruity Loops? That's hours of work indeed. Well, anyway, you got the mood nicely, but I think it's a little "trop" (too epic). I think your main synth is a bit overdone, just like the clap beat. Or is that just me?
Anyway, the idea is nice, so keep trying!
I should put more time making it.. maybe
Nice!
Well, I'm against giving perfect scores, so here's a 9/10 5/5. It's an quite epic song, with well chosen instruments and a perfectly composed plot.
I'm looking forward to other songs from you!
Thank you very much, it's great you enjoyed listening! :)
More is definitely going to come.^^
Nice!
For a ambient track, it's pretty neat. It gives a somewhat lost feeling, but also a slightly feeling of hope, of a light at the end of the tunnel.
Anyway, it's good. Nice for a "select the hero for this doomed city"-screen.
Indeed :D But it bugs me that I had to crank the quality down so much, you kinda miss all the small details.
Nah...
Could be just me, but I'm completely missing the melody. It's just a random square with a noisy kick. You'll have to redo it.
Awww... Where's the melody?
No, serious. It's hard to find the melody in your 8-bits, because you are totally over-mixing. You've got some heavy Drum 'n Bass, a dark "you're dying" bass melody, and a rushing bright "they're chasing you"-overlay. It's just too much.
Keep trying, anyway.
Thanks. This was my first try composing all the way through with every instrument. I learned it takes a little time to get it down and still have structure.
Much more of an incoherent experiment compared to some of my other songs, I would think.
Not bad
Yeah, what he said! Well, whatever he said, he was right. You can't just switch from a bass melody to one with some high notes. You have to choose a feeling, and keep it that way. Oh, and you should stop messing with effects, and especially the guitar. I hate that thing.
Anyway, keep tryin', though!
Nice!
As Maverlyn said: It's a nice track for a RTS game. Imagine this music while your building tanks and defence outposts because the enemy will arrive in five minutes... Yeah, sounds like Warzone 2100 indeed.
Anyway, keep making music, maybe I'll buy it!
maybe you will...
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