Nice, dark, and tense...
Fruity Loops? That's hours of work indeed. Well, anyway, you got the mood nicely, but I think it's a little "trop" (too epic). I think your main synth is a bit overdone, just like the clap beat. Or is that just me?
Anyway, the idea is nice, so keep trying!
I should put more time making it.. maybe
Nice!
Well, I'm against giving perfect scores, so here's a 9/10 5/5. It's an quite epic song, with well chosen instruments and a perfectly composed plot.
I'm looking forward to other songs from you!
Thank you very much, it's great you enjoyed listening! :)
More is definitely going to come.^^
Awesomeness indeed!
Yeah, that's a 9/10 and a 4/5 for combining 8-bit and Linkin Park.
You've managed quite well to translate the original instruments into 8-bit,
but I advise you to just create a new song on the original melody the next time.
Anyway, it's epic.
Thats the biggest problem.
I cant create my own melody....it turns out more turd than a 3 year old jumping arround on a piano...really. And then i get all pissed and whatnot. <.<
Also, great idea. :D
Nice!
For a ambient track, it's pretty neat. It gives a somewhat lost feeling, but also a slightly feeling of hope, of a light at the end of the tunnel.
Anyway, it's good. Nice for a "select the hero for this doomed city"-screen.
Indeed :D But it bugs me that I had to crank the quality down so much, you kinda miss all the small details.
Nah...
Could be just me, but I'm completely missing the melody. It's just a random square with a noisy kick. You'll have to redo it.
Awww... Where's the melody?
No, serious. It's hard to find the melody in your 8-bits, because you are totally over-mixing. You've got some heavy Drum 'n Bass, a dark "you're dying" bass melody, and a rushing bright "they're chasing you"-overlay. It's just too much.
Keep trying, anyway.
Thanks. This was my first try composing all the way through with every instrument. I learned it takes a little time to get it down and still have structure.
Much more of an incoherent experiment compared to some of my other songs, I would think.
Not bad
Yeah, what he said! Well, whatever he said, he was right. You can't just switch from a bass melody to one with some high notes. You have to choose a feeling, and keep it that way. Oh, and you should stop messing with effects, and especially the guitar. I hate that thing.
Anyway, keep tryin', though!
Nice!
As Maverlyn said: It's a nice track for a RTS game. Imagine this music while your building tanks and defence outposts because the enemy will arrive in five minutes... Yeah, sounds like Warzone 2100 indeed.
Anyway, keep making music, maybe I'll buy it!
maybe you will...
It at least inspired me.
Ah, come on, you're only seventeen... You still have about 70 years to go, so your life isn't failed yet. I know how you're feeling, I have felt the same way many times, but you still have a lot of years to go, years you can spend on impressing yourself, and making fun out of life.
The only thing you need to do, is to start having fun. You do not need to impress anyone. I failed on that point a lot of times too.
"If your live is a failed experiment, then you'd better leave the Lab."
Just have fun, it's the only way to survive live.
Greetings, ProNoob.
It's just a song, I'm content with my life.
Nice idea!
What I liked the most about his song was the intro.The rest of it really overdone. And you should stop switching the whole song every 30 seconds.
In my opinion you should just keep the intro, and add some more instruments to it, to make the song more interesting.
Anyway, keep mixin'!
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