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[[Yellow Phaser]]

Hmmm...

I do like the melody, and the beat, but I dislike the Main Synth for being so overruling. You should have a look at the main synth, since it's the main part in your music, and now it's interrupting the other sounds a bit.

Anyway, I can hear you know how to compose.
Keep making music!

TheBoredBoy responds:

Yes, Im working on the main synth right now.
Should have an updated version up within a few days, so cheers for the review.

[Dance Trains, We Got V.2]

You're improving!

Nice, dude. Way better than your first one. Now the melody indeed is more catchy.

The main problem I see are the vocals. The "Dance trains" vocals seem to be made for a moody trance song, and it doesn't match nicely with your deep, nearly aggressive dance track. I think you need an ambience synth on the background, that plays solo when the vocal girl is speaking.

I have to admit this would be better than any dance-track I could make at the moment, but I'm more a trance DJ.

Just keep mixing, buddy!

[Super Mario (by txc)]

Hmmm...

Sorry, but in my opinion a remix should contain something "new", something personal. This is just an acidized, echoed an dubbed version of the original.

I'm sorry, but I don't like this, just because of the lack of innovation.

Keep trying, though.

txc2011 responds:

Yeah I knew shouldnt have called it a "remix". I know what you mean though thanks for the review

[Dance Trains, We Got]

Could be done better...

I'm sorry, but I don't like it really.
Not because of it would be bad music,
but it needs a lot of improvements.

In first place, you need a new melody.
This one is way too depressive.

Next, you should replace the synth.
This one is quite noisy/disturbed.

I hope it will get better,
but just keep trying.

djgo responds:

thanx for the tip

[-Uncertainty- Song]

Hmmm...

It certainly has potential, but for me it sounded like it's the Béta version of a demo.

What I liked about this song is the background music, it's smooth, calming and a bit gentle. But, as you said before, the song needs other vocals. Not that I dislike your voice, but it really distracted me from the message of your lyrics.

What is that message, anyway? I tried to understand you're lyrics twice, but it doesn't seem to make sense for me.

Anywho, keep making music.

RyeGuyHead responds:

yea, this song is in no way complete

The message involves the fog as a metaphor for being uncertain about things

Thanks!

(female vocals would work best, but does ANYONE want to record over this?)

[RPG Hero's Courage]

Great!

It's pretty cool! It's really intense, but I think you should make a loopable of it, to use it in a game, where it should be.

Anyway, keep submitting music!

[So Deep, Deeper, and Deep]

Sweeet!

It's pretty awesome. Normally I only would give reviews for improvement, but this awesomeness itself.

The only thing that I would have a look at, is that the little background "tingle" is looped, and that it's a bit anoying after a while.

Anyway, keep making good music!

typeMARS responds:

thanks! i'm improved! :D

[Cosmicgraveyard-Track 13]

Could have worked out better...

I hate it to give reviews lower than a 7,
but in my opinion it is far, far away from perfection.

It just needs some more variation, and I think it should be a little bit more melodyous. Ask yourself: "What mood should the listener get from my music?"

Anyway, keep up the music.

[Happy Short]

As said: Happy and Short

I like it, it's motivating, friendly, but in my opinion way too short.
You could have made so much more out of it. Just out of this loops, you could have extended it for two minutes. This is just too much variation for 55 seconds.

Just keep posting new music!

MicroVirus6 responds:

thank you! honestly i'd rather have a small project bursting with energy than a longer drawn out one

[Extreme Radiation]

Brightfull, but a bit monotonous.

I can't say I don't like this, but it's just a bit too simple. I know you put you're best efforts in it, but it could have some more changing in, for example, the overlaying melody.

I'd say that it needs some more difference to keep it exciting, and that it should be some longer. Keep practising!