ProNoob13's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[My Life's a Failed Experiment]

It at least inspired me.

Ah, come on, you're only seventeen... You still have about 70 years to go, so your life isn't failed yet. I know how you're feeling, I have felt the same way many times, but you still have a lot of years to go, years you can spend on impressing yourself, and making fun out of life.

The only thing you need to do, is to start having fun. You do not need to impress anyone. I failed on that point a lot of times too.

"If your live is a failed experiment, then you'd better leave the Lab."

Just have fun, it's the only way to survive live.

Greetings, ProNoob.

PizzaBox responds:

It's just a song, I'm content with my life.

[[e99] Emergence]

Hmm... Nice...

It is perfect for a movie indeed, it would be nice under a few fading shots of dead battlefields, burning castles, silent mountains, and crying families. This song wants me to go back in movie business, because I would have to like to mix a movie's ending under this music.

Anywho, the song is very dramatic, and calming in the same time. This is some really nice work, friend. Keep making music!

e991e responds:

Thanks a ton man

[simple nifty loop]

It's a start...

Yeah, I'm almost enthusiast about it, but I'm in a bad mood due to a lack of sleep. Anyway, this loop is a nice base for a good song. I've already beatboxed two variations that could be overlaying this melody, so I hope you will make a song out of it someday.

I'm looking forward to the "something more" a bit later!

omacron6 responds:

i plan to.
this is just one (of many) variation if the tune.
i've got a more upbeat version in the worx.
hopefully i'll have it done soon.
go ahead and send me your beats.

[Wait Another Moment]

Tragic, emotional, inspiring, and well done.

I really like it. It's gentle, but it still makes you feeling like "you are waiting for something". I feel like making a movie for this song.

Oh, and I agree with Chamon: the heartbeat measuring machine shouldn't have come back, because it is quite disturbing in the smooth melody.

Anyway, I hope that you'll make some more song of this type.

xxdeadundeadxx responds:

I brought it back cause I wanted you to have the feel of damn the person didn't make it. Thanks so much for your review! I have two more up at the moment.

[[Yellow Phaser]]

Hmmm...

I do like the melody, and the beat, but I dislike the Main Synth for being so overruling. You should have a look at the main synth, since it's the main part in your music, and now it's interrupting the other sounds a bit.

Anyway, I can hear you know how to compose.
Keep making music!

TheBoredBoy responds:

Yes, Im working on the main synth right now.
Should have an updated version up within a few days, so cheers for the review.

[Super Mario (by txc)]

Hmmm...

Sorry, but in my opinion a remix should contain something "new", something personal. This is just an acidized, echoed an dubbed version of the original.

I'm sorry, but I don't like this, just because of the lack of innovation.

Keep trying, though.

txc2011 responds:

Yeah I knew shouldnt have called it a "remix". I know what you mean though thanks for the review

[Dance Trains, We Got]

Could be done better...

I'm sorry, but I don't like it really.
Not because of it would be bad music,
but it needs a lot of improvements.

In first place, you need a new melody.
This one is way too depressive.

Next, you should replace the synth.
This one is quite noisy/disturbed.

I hope it will get better,
but just keep trying.

djgo responds:

thanx for the tip

[-Uncertainty- Song]

Hmmm...

It certainly has potential, but for me it sounded like it's the Béta version of a demo.

What I liked about this song is the background music, it's smooth, calming and a bit gentle. But, as you said before, the song needs other vocals. Not that I dislike your voice, but it really distracted me from the message of your lyrics.

What is that message, anyway? I tried to understand you're lyrics twice, but it doesn't seem to make sense for me.

Anywho, keep making music.

RyeGuyHead responds:

yea, this song is in no way complete

The message involves the fog as a metaphor for being uncertain about things

Thanks!

(female vocals would work best, but does ANYONE want to record over this?)

[So Deep, Deeper, and Deep]

Sweeet!

It's pretty awesome. Normally I only would give reviews for improvement, but this awesomeness itself.

The only thing that I would have a look at, is that the little background "tingle" is looped, and that it's a bit anoying after a while.

Anyway, keep making good music!

typeMARS responds:

thanks! i'm improved! :D

[Happy Short]

As said: Happy and Short

I like it, it's motivating, friendly, but in my opinion way too short.
You could have made so much more out of it. Just out of this loops, you could have extended it for two minutes. This is just too much variation for 55 seconds.

Just keep posting new music!

MicroVirus6 responds:

thank you! honestly i'd rather have a small project bursting with energy than a longer drawn out one