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Nice...

Yup, I like it! It's smooth, soft, slightly dramatic, and "epic". I would like to mix it under a movie somewhere, but I'll keep that in mind. Anyway, it's nice.

Keep mixing!

Hmmm... I don't really like it...

Well, I just learned what Dial-UP internet is, but that doesn't change the fact that I dislike this music. You just mixed some dialing sounds over a simple beat and a noisy synth. Besides that, it's too turbulent at the end, and it is quite repetitive. Sorry, but that's all it is for me. Oh, and the five is for the effort and because I hate giving low rates.

You have to keep trying, though!

I like it!

Yeah, this is some nice music. I think that the vocals should have some more volume, but I really like it. Can PM me the lyrics, bytheway? I think the melody is really overmixed.

Anyway, keep making music!

Not bad...

Since I'm the seventh listener, I'll review this. It is quite a good song, but it's a little bit too fast in my opinion. You've done the trance synthesizers well, I like the melody. But, you've speed-ed up the vocals, which I really disliked, because you can't "just listen to the lyrics" anymore, since it's too fast. In example, check the bridge on 2:27. Way too fast.

Anyway, you did well. Keep making music!

Hmm... Nice...

It is perfect for a movie indeed, it would be nice under a few fading shots of dead battlefields, burning castles, silent mountains, and crying families. This song wants me to go back in movie business, because I would have to like to mix a movie's ending under this music.

Anywho, the song is very dramatic, and calming in the same time. This is some really nice work, friend. Keep making music!

e991e responds:

Thanks a ton man

It really sounds like Logic Studio...

Yeah, I know that it is a test, but making Rock Riffs with Logic isn't the best thing you could come up with. Let me quote: "the same old chords, you know the way it goes"... You could immediatly hear that it's computerwork since it's near-perfect and repetative. But the mix with the drums, the bg-synth, and the guitar sounds quite nice.

I only want to advice you not to use computer-software to generate screaming guitars.

Where are the vocals!?

I get your point of orchestral remixing LP's Breaking The Habit, but I miss the vocals! I know you've done your best with this remix, but I just miss the vocals, which made the original song "listenable" for me. Oh, and this isn't "general rock". More like pop, I think.

Sorry, dude, but I just can't listen normally without the vocals.

It's a start...

Yeah, I'm almost enthusiast about it, but I'm in a bad mood due to a lack of sleep. Anyway, this loop is a nice base for a good song. I've already beatboxed two variations that could be overlaying this melody, so I hope you will make a song out of it someday.

I'm looking forward to the "something more" a bit later!

omacron6 responds:

i plan to.
this is just one (of many) variation if the tune.
i've got a more upbeat version in the worx.
hopefully i'll have it done soon.
go ahead and send me your beats.

Smooth song...

Somtimes I just feel the same. Yeah...

Anyway, review. You've created a nice melody, very smooth and ambienced. It actually gives the feeling you described, the feeling "about how you feel when you dont really wanna be anywhere, you just wander around in the streets, looking at all the peoble walking by, without them knowing how you really feel inside". The only thing I dislike are the vocals. In my opinion they are a bit chaotic (in the beginning(, and somewhat disturbing the music.

But all with all you've created a nice track,
and I'll look forward to your next song.

Tragic, emotional, inspiring, and well done.

I really like it. It's gentle, but it still makes you feeling like "you are waiting for something". I feel like making a movie for this song.

Oh, and I agree with Chamon: the heartbeat measuring machine shouldn't have come back, because it is quite disturbing in the smooth melody.

Anyway, I hope that you'll make some more song of this type.

xxdeadundeadxx responds:

I brought it back cause I wanted you to have the feel of damn the person didn't make it. Thanks so much for your review! I have two more up at the moment.

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